Alright, this one you don't have to comment on... but it's another poem I wrote. It's written in a simple 'ab" pattern or rhyming couplet style. Oh, and I threw in some alliteration too. That's basically all I can write besides free verse. (Not very impressive... oh well)

My apologies the tone is rather... 'emo'... I suppose I had a rather depressing demeanor that day. (Maybe Marvin would like this poem...haha) Nonetheless, take it as you will:

A Disobedient Conscious
By Michangelina

Questioning the darkest hour--
Forgetting the corruptive power.
Seen only at the bottom of the sea,
or in the next galaxy...

Don't know where to turn,
Sensing your stomach burn.
Your conscious doesn't want to obey.
Will You Stay or Die?
A fountain of tears to cry
But no goodbye

The maze...
A secret gaze...
Transformation phase...
All take D A Y S.
To forget about,
And to remember,
... when it's oblivious...