This is the poem that gave me writer's block-- a lot of trouble. It's free style.
LOST AND FOUND
I took a risk
My heart was waiting for you at the Lost and Found,
Sapphire crystals-- dark blue, cold, cerulean.
Sapphire-- Aluminum oxide.
Much like my shattered soul.
We both have had a tragic past.
You've dived off the deep end; arrived at the bottom of the teary sea
Depression's sick mind
I've ran far and fast as I could but I couldn't escape
The echos calling back to find my ghosts.
The world is crumbling.
Maybe, oh maybe.
In some kind of dream, have I seen you before?
There could be a chance- To bring warmth
I admired your voice... your smile...
I screamed without making a sound
I am only in the far back of your mind, I am now the ghost--
How could I confess my secret?
To someone like you
You seem dead on outside but there's a world underneath
I want you to be with me.
I finally met you.
Who am I?
There is a feeling of inadequacy--
A psychological paranoia.
I will break through the limitations.
I will show you who I am.
9 comments:
very deep poem.I don't know what experience you have behind this.You should be cool.
Um... Awkward.
Um... thank you.
If you are only going to say one word to describe an entire poem, then I suggest you don't.
Well... I don't know what else to say at the current moment. That's probably the nicest thing I've got at them oment.
Well, "awkward" isn't exactly a nice word...
What didn't you like about this poem?
I didn't like just... Pretty much everything about it. The story, how you wrote it, and similiar things that I can't find words for. It wasn't one of your good ones.
very good poem, so much detail
it would take me many reads to try to understand, whom you may be refering too. but i like that the same with my movies... i need to think to follow, not an easy hay ride. "like hey that was nice"
a most mature mind you have there Michangelina, i hope you are happy with such a gift?
Thank you Rockin, :D
Yeah, I know my poems aren't always easy to follow. Most of my 'Scraps of Poetry' are complicated. There is a deeper meaning that relates to my life, however, I do not know if others can find it.
Sadly, the poem was written about a guy I liked-- Which is so ORDINARY. I add in all these details to make it more interesting.
I think seem more mature on my blog then in real life. :P And I just love writing poetry, something I do.
Alewey, I think this poem isn't one of my favorites either. Plus, you kind of know about the guy I liked and probably think it's weird that I'd write about him. I'm guessing...?
Eh. idk. I'm not commenting more on this because I forgot everything.
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