Define: Michangelina

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I am both logical and imaginative. I’ve always been a daydreamer and a nightthinker. My ego is nerdy/random; I often have deep inquisitions about the Universe. My Universe is quite abstruse but mostly harmless. If you pursue my friendship, give me chocolate. Statistically, I'm normal, but by my twisted logic, I have an incentive that cries: survival of the uniquest!

Sestina

I was exploring different poetic forms to write in, and I came across the sestina. Intrigued by the idea of having to write thirty-nine lines, I took the challenge. It was actually a fairly easy poem to write because there is no rhyming or meter involved. However, I became bored of the six words I chose. Next time I write a sestina, I will chose words that have more than one definition! Nevertheless, this poem gave me a lot of good experience.

A sestina follows a pretty picky pattern. Each line must end specifically with one of the following six words I chose: escape, burn, forget, memory, black, and candle. The rest can be written in free verse. 

Here is the layout:

First stanza: Escape, Burn, Forget, Memory, Black, Candle
Second stanza: Candle, Escape, Black, Burn, Memory, Forget
Third stanza: Forget, Candle, Memory, Escape, Burn, Black
Fourth stanza: Black, Forget, Burn, Candle, Escape, Memory
Fifth stanza: Memory, Black, Escape, Forget, Candle, Burn
Sixth stanza: Burn, Memory, Candle, Black, Forget, Escape
Seventh stanza: Burn-Black, Memory-Forget, Candle-Escape

The narrator of this poem is a girl who has many suppressed thoughts and uses regression as a defense mechanism. (Please don’t ask me why my blog has been full of so much psychological stuff lately. I honestly have no clue.)

Sestina I
Since I was a young girl, I dreamed of making an escape.
Inside me was a sensation I could not explain, a pulsating burn…
My thoughts entangled my imagination; it formed images I cannot forget.
They haunt me till this day— permanently encoded into my memory.
Trusting and so naive, my white innocence tainted black.
I saw nothing of it; I thought I was just following a candle.

For years, I was footsteps behind the flickering candle…
The candle was my muse each night before sleep, my escape.
I desired the candle each night the sky turned black
My hands wanted to feel its warmth, and feel its burn.
But the candle was always from my grasp, it was only a memory.
Only the tender sunlight could help me forget.

On days I felt alone; everything but the candle, I would forget.
And on days I felt cold, I would remember the fragrance of the candle.
It was an arousing scent traced deep inside my memory.
I was ashamed; my friends never needed an escape.
My friends had no tensions that they wished to burn—
I realized regression was wrong, so I watched roses turn black.

Years later, I prayed for forgiveness, and the candlewick turned black.
Strange how my monomania was something I could forget.
The past was behind me; but I found other ways to suppress my burn
My thoughts were blinded without the candle
But soon, I found a different way to escape—
I created one new memory after another new memory

Was this the solution to completely clearing my memory?
I felt like I polluting my mind and blazing my heart black—
I questioned if what I was doing was really a healthy escape
I discovered the answer when it was too late to forget.
Inside the cover of a book, there was the candle.
After the truth was revealed, I accepted my burn.

I was not the only one still crying from a childhood burn.
At last, I found someone like me, who liked to live in old memories…
We hid together as I watched his eyes gaze at the candle.
We would inhale the night air as our pupils dilated black
Together, guilt was something we grew strong to forget.
He and I would plan out our beautiful escape—

Now that he is gone, the burn hollowed my heart into an abyss, so black.
I would do anything to live another memory with him. To laugh and forget
How I held my candle, and he held his during our vacation’s escape.

Sonnet II

My first sonnet was lonely, so I wrote another one to keep it company. This sonnet is about some of my intrinsic values. I am a very self-conscience person, and this reflects how I feel about myself most of the time. There is a hint of self-acceptance at the end much like Amanda Palmer's "In My Mind". It is a very uplifting song if you need to get out of a state of depression.

Sonnet II

From the beginning, I can remember,
There were flaws in me I wanted to change.
In the mirror, I saw my eyes burn ember.
My irises bloomed brown to green; twas strange.
There was a girl who smiled in the mirror--
We stood like twins, but she was no reflection
When I looked away, she grew much nearer,
But further from my need for perfection.
I could only see my limitations,
She desired nothing less than ideal.
I made impossible expectations,
She hated me not being surreal,
In the mirror world; one of us is trapped.

Sonnet I

After finishing The Winter's Tale, Shakespeare's ghost haunted me to write in iambic pentameter. So finally, at last, here is the sonnet I promised. Before you read it, feel welcome to read my interpretation and inspiration or just dive right into the poem. (I would.)

INTERPRETATION:
I do not normally explain my poems because I enjoy hearing my readers' multiple interpretations, but I am making an exception today. My poem is about the psychology of sleeping and how there are five different stages. I refer to these stages as "doors". The fifth stage "door" is mentioned at the octave of the sonnet because that is when REM begins.

Furthermore, notice that the first word I chose is "exhaling" and the last word is "hallucination". I always found it interesting that some scientists theorize that the hallucinogen
DMT may be naturally produced in the pineal gland when one is dreaming or having a near death experience. So question whether or not the speaker of my poem is really dreaming or under the influence.

INSPIRATION:
Besides the psychology of sleeping and the science behind DMT, I was deeply inspired by two more things. First, I fell madly in love with Shakespeare's sonnet: Sonnet XLIII (Great website). Secondly, I was deeply moved by this beautiful work of art: Door Within a Door. Reminds me of my analogy.

Enjoy,

SONNET I: 
Exhaling my day's thoughts into the night--
The sense of falling startled me awake,
But then my mind becalmed from the stage fright.
Entranced, I could not tell real from fake.
I opened a door that appeared unlocked,
Behind it came three more doors, so it seemed.
Through each one, my mind deepened as I walked.
Finally, I passed the fifth door and dreamed.
Dreamed of memories and patterns that swirled,
Lost fragments from a time-space hurricane,
People who lived on a parallel world,
Created by a compound in my brain.
Will I ever find an explanation?
A lucid dream or hallucination?

P.S. Real is two syllables.
American Heritage Dictionary: Real

Coincidences

I wrote a short story because I found a very old rough draft of one. I decided to completely rewrite it and I feel somewhat satisfied with the way it turned out.

The setting of the story is in a bookstore. I wrote my first draft of this story three years ago inside a Borders bookstore I was quite attached to. Other than that, the rest of my story is fiction.

Coincidences

P.S. I was deeply inspired by the book Shutter Island.

How to Write Poetry

The following quote is from the short, flowery novel The Picture of Dorian Gray, and it inspired me to type up a how to guide on poetry:

“Words! Mere words! How terrible they were! How clear, and vivid, and cruel! One could not escape from them. And yet what a subtle magic there was in them! They seemed to be able to give a plastic form to formless things, and to have a music of their own as sweet as that of viol or of lute. Mere words! Was there anything so real as words?”
(Oscar Wilde)

Poetry is the dividing line between art and literature. Writing a poem frees your mind from all the limitations of prose. Instead of constructing main ideas followed by orderly sentences, you can express your thoughts creatively.

What is creative?

Being a creative person takes imagination. I think most children were very imaginative. Women: think back when you were young girls and played with your dolls. Remember how effortlessly you designed those complex stories and conversations? And men: think back when you were young boys and you used to dress up as your favorite superhero. Staying in character seemed like the easiest thing to do in the world. Of course, society does not let us act like children anymore, but our imagination still exists. In fact, it has become much more enriched! So, use it! Don’t abandon it and let it collect dust.

Creativity takes a lot of time and patience. Everyone has their own individuality, but to express it in poetry, you really have to come out of your shell.

Much like this poem I wrote:

Poetry is painless, it beats our hearts…
Observe the world inside you and around,
Explore those two worlds til you find a spark,
Try listening to your favorite poets,
Revise your work and give it its own style,
You can share your uniqueness with the world.

Poetry is a 6 step process:
  1. Find the creative side inside of you. Start with a nice cup of coffee at your favorite shop, buy a fancy new journal, write in green ink like Pablo Neruda, or whatever color inspires you.
  2. If you come up with a BIG ___________________blank__________________________ Write down anything. Start with what is in front of you. Use your five senses. How does your coffee taste? Does it have a pleasant aroma? Is it hot to the touch or cold? Does it look dark as your soul? Does the sound of coffee beans being ground annoy you? Don't forget your sixth sense. Don't have one? Pretend you do. It always makes writing more interesting.
  3. The coffee. It sucks. It reminds you of your ex-boyfriend. Watered down, cold, and boring. There. There's your spark. You're incorporating memories into your poem! Combining the present with your past makes beautiful writing.
  4. You tried to sweeten your coffee with some honey when your fingers got all sticky. After returning to your table with some napkins, you're completely stuck. You can't write anymore. Don't panic. Google search your favorite poet or musician. Listen to the words. Let the words inspire you to finish your poem.
  5. Finally, you feel somewhat accomplished. Your poem has a beginning, middle, and end. Then you realize it's hardly poetry at all. There's no rhyming, no rhythm, or devices used. Don’t let this dishearten you. Go back and add them in. Instead of that clique simile you used, turn it into a motif. Open up a thesaurus, go on RhymeZone.com. Never publish a poem until you finish your fifth draft.
  6. What gratification is there in writing a poem if no one is going to enjoy it? Present your poem to a loved one or post it on a poetry community like PoetrySoup.com. Someone out there needs help with step five.
Have fun creative writers! Don't be afraid to tell your deepest secrets in a poem because you can obscure it so much with words that no one will know what you're talking about anyway.

Eleven Last Words

I would like to begin this post with a quote, “Man cannot discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore” (Andre Gide). I know this quote by heart because it is tattooed in Chinese characters on the left side of my significant other's chest. He and I both understand the powerful meaning of this quote. Traveling takes courage, adaptability, and respect. These are the three fundamental elements that represent my life.

(I was going to write a transitional phrase just now, but then I realized life and death are opposites. If I wrote a transitional phrase, it would expand into a short novel. What you're reading in parenthesis now is so you understand that my mind does not simple wander, but rather it thinks so expeditiously it doesn't have time to explain. I hope this suffices.)

When I greet death someday, I hope my last words will be poetic. Perhaps I should prepare something now because my death could tragically appear at any time. I was thinking of something short and to the point. Something I could whisper under my breath effortlessly. It occurred to me that the best type of poem for this occasion is a haiku. A haiku has a total of seventeen syllables. That is three less than a rhyming couplet written in iambic pentameter. So here is what I have written, hopefully, I won't be reciting these eleven words any time soon:

The autumn waters
Of this world enlighten me,
From this delusion.

Autumn represents death because during the everlasting cycle of the four seasons, the climatic changes of autumn appear to be withering. Water represents an inescapable force as well. I am not sure if there is an afterlife, but if I could have whatever I wanted, the afterlife would be a gigantic library of everything one has ever desired knowledge about. All the world's universal truths explained at your fingertips. I hope Heaven is enlightenment.

Next week, I am going to give a few tips on writing poetry. As an aspiring English teacher, I should take this "how to" guide seriously, but writing a parody of one is far more entertaining.

A Stream of Consciousness

Lately, I have been reading Chinese poetry. There is a beautiful collection on Chinese-poems.com. The poems I read are naturalistic and would make Wordsworth himself take a deep breathe in awe. I find nature equally beautiful, but I find it challenging to write about it. I am not accustomed to seeing nature. Living in a desert and a city, nature lies only in the imagination. I come across more concrete buildings, flashing lights, and litter than I do plains, rivers, and forests. I feel like I have substituted artificiality for nature in my heart. For instance, each day I walk to school, I like to think of it as a little journey.

Yes, it’s time for a stream of consciousness.

From my apartment to the campus library, it is a forty minute walk. A lot can happen in forty minutes. Within the first five minutes, I walk past an empty lot that used to be an apartment complex. Pieces of colorful tile still lie stuck to the ground there. Tumbleweeds, pieces of glass, and other miscellaneous items from the past of where these people used to live lie abandoned on the dusty, dry dirt. I admire this empty lot because it reminds me of a deserted plain. A place people used to live and call home. It is odd walking past there because I wonder if denizens who used to live there make the same trace my steps do now.

I continue to walk and come across a flood channel. Since I was little girl, I have always lived by one. I love walking by the flood channel because it’s rare to see water in a desert. I always find it awe-inspiring to walk by one when it is raining outside. The flow of the channel goes from a slow moving and peaceful river to a raging, wild rapid. On most days, there are clear skies and ducks floating in the channel. I often think about going down there and feeding them, or eating them, depending whether or not I am hungry.

My last destination is at UNLV. I always admire the trees over by the Physics and Chemistry buildings. The trees are majestically tall and leafy. Recently, their leaves have been falling off and I walk by there at night and purposely step on them to hear the soft crunch noise under my feet. I feel like I am walking through a tiny forest or a few minutes.

Even though I live in the city, I still enjoy nature as much as anyone. I substitute an empty lot or a deserted plain, a flood channel as a river, and a small patch of trees as a forest. I may not be as imaginative as I was as a kid, but I still like to make comparisons in my head.

Back to Chinese poetry, you may be wondering why I have picked up an interest in this. (Other than the fact that I’m minoring in Chinese and plan on moving to Shanghai.) I like Chinese poetry because I want a Chinese tattoo. I want to combine my passion for Chinese writing and poetry. Someday, once I develop enough vocabulary and grammar skills in Chinese, I want to write my own Chinese poem following a similar structure and poetic format as they do. The first thing I learned is that their poems are based off nature. So, I have a lot to learn until I can write my own poem in Chinese, but it is definitely going to be a fun journey.

Autumn the Wanderer

My poetry block is slowly disintegrating. I should post something new eventually. I current have two unfinished poems titled, "Imaginary Rose" and "Artificiality". One of them is written on a napkin and the other is currently misplaced. How typical of me.

Tonight, I fell in love with the autumn moonlight and amber-scented breeze while I was walking to the library. Autumn is my favorite season because it's the most beautiful. I also love celebrating 中秋节 (Autumn Moon Festival). Something about the lit paper lanterns and delicious moon cakes remind me of Halloween. Just look at this beautiful photo: Lanterns.

I was also very inspired by this poem I found. It's written by Rauwolfia van Raaij:

Autumn the Wanderer

Dead leaves are all you left behind
To break beneath my feet,
I hate to see you leave this land
Now banished by defeat.

A wanderer you have become
A wounded creature gold,
You leave red blood and bits of soul
A pathway for the cold.

You stumble on the roads of life
Each year we meet again,
And passing by you take my hand
And touch my heart with pain.

Old memories come back to me
Of years before the war,
The days before you fought the cold 
And taught the winds to soar.

You were my friend, we danced each day
And laughed in storms of flame,
I heard you cry each starlit night
Until the winter came.

One morning when I called to you
You did not answer back,
I searched for you all through that day
Until the sky was black.

Then just as stars begun to rise
Upon a field of frost,
I found a puddle of your blood
And knew that you had lost.

Inspiration

I'm not particularly full of ideas, but people look at me like hungry wolves anyway. I've been diagnosed with "writer's block" for a long time now, and I've learned that ideas don't flow. They come in bits and pieces. Sometimes I'm organized. I actually keep one of those Barnes & Nobles bookstore journals and actually write inside of that journal. Is that journal by my side when I actually have an idea? NO. Whenever I get a decent idea, there is absolutely no paper or writing utensils around me. My hypothesis is if I surround myself in a paperless environment, ideas will pop out because I don't have anything to write them down. My rough drafts are embarrassing to look at. They are always written on crummy looking pieces of paper ripped out from books, newspapers, and magazines. All my original work is always thrown away, haha. Much like Wreck This Journal


One of my favorite websites to read that gives me hope and inspiration is Poetry Soup. My username is "Michangelina" and a lot of my poems have received comments on there. It's nice to know that there are other aspiring poets in this world who will probably never receive any recognition for their work except by other aspiring poets.

The Land and the Sea


This poem was inspired by two people who I have grown very attached to. Maybe one day I will go back and edit this poem so it is not longer in free style. I don't know why I hate free style so much.

Anyway, let's talk about something cool: my birth. I was born inside a beach house, not a hospital. My mother went into labor two weeks early when she was relaxing in the sand letting the waves crash into her legs. I think the ocean excited me and I was ready to come out.

One of my lovely friends claims I was meant to be a mermaid. Maybe I was! :) Haha, anyway. I thought I would share one of my favorite websites that is full of secrets: Post Secret ... It's a great website if you want to hear some sad, beautiful, and interesting confessions. I plan on sending them a post card sometime soon.

The Land and the Sea

He fills me with excitement;
I love keeping him a secret—
The way he calls me “beautiful”,
His warm hands,
Dreamy eyes that secure me in a place of wonder,
A void that travels oceanic depths,
To visit a lonely seashell, where I live.

We talk through echolocation...
He hears my frequencies, pitches, and tones,
Listens to every pulse
Because it resonates his mind.
Communication unlike any I have ever had--
We do not need words;
We share breaths, moans, and whispers.

I want to swim with him to a place no one knows about.
A place where we can watch a blue world turn technicolor.
I want to watch the sunrise and sunset with him,
Resurface home by evening,
And know
That he is deep under the water,
My Atlantis

At home, I collect these soothing memories,
And stash them away between two pages in a book.
Where no one will ever dare to look--
Home is where I am loved.
He and I walk on this earth together;
We march in unison, perfectly happy.

So why?
Why do I need to hide under the water?
Why do I hold my breath every time,
I think about a part of me that lies on the ocean floor?
Don’t I belong on the bedroom floor?
In a perfectly white room?
In clothes that fit just a tad too tight?
Be down to earth?

I would rather complete go bare,
And dive into my escape.
The ocean calls me while
The land wonders why I leave him,
The land fears me drowning,
The land fears me leaving him to join the fish,
The land does not know where to find me.

I inspire to be with both the land and sea,
Live in a little beach house,
The ocean will always see me,
The land will always support me.
I cannot trust the ocean because he does not know where he is going;
Sometimes he make me seasick with uncertainty,
Unpredictability, and doubt...

The land protects me,
I just fear earthquakes and tsunamis.
The tide coming too close,
Flooding my home,
Ruining the foundation.
The place where I belong,
No longer has a roof over my head.
Coexistence is unobtainable,
So I will go on my vacations,
And tell the land to wait.
Hoping he will trust me
I wish I could breathe underwater...
And not feel asphyxiated for air.
Sweet oxygen tormenting my lungs!

My salty tears are capsuled memories
Of how much I miss the sea...
The sea floats on without me,
He is so expansive...
I wonder if he really misses me.
Should I ground myself and bury my heart in the ground?
Or swim in the waves where they may take me?

Stalkers